Criterion A: 4- some of the things that I said were very basic and I couldn't exactly remember where my passage came from.
Criterion B: 4- I mention the literary features used in the passage, but I don't really fully explain them or the effect they had on the reader
Criterion C: 2- Very repetitive at times, doesn't really "flow"
Criterion D: 2- I have a lot of incomplete thoughts
Sydney:
ReplyDelete- Strong intro and organization at beginning
- Make sure you're thinking about effect and not making assumptions
- Think more about effect on text instead of effect on audience
- Need more language and literary features analyzed- think about the big 5 from your IOC packet/ our Stranger passage analysis